[poem] fragment: echo
Mar. 14th, 2020 11:21 amWhat if? -- the stick
beats time (too late) from railings--
ribs that chime my choices (if if if if if)--
keep other-whens held close, contained, confined.
beats time (too late) from railings--
ribs that chime my choices (if if if if if)--
keep other-whens held close, contained, confined.
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Date: 2020-03-14 11:29 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-14 05:08 pm (UTC)I like the fragment, especially the last line.
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Date: 2020-03-14 09:06 pm (UTC)<3
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Date: 2020-03-14 11:59 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-15 11:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-14 12:42 pm (UTC)I like the railings to ribs segue.
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Date: 2020-03-15 11:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-14 08:49 pm (UTC)also: YOU POEMED! I have missed your poems!
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Date: 2020-03-14 09:07 pm (UTC)I am Very Enjoying having poemed! I have not quite had the brain for it, and kept going "ugh I need to get myself back into the habit, let's do Some Practice", and then this showed up -- in two different forms, one while I was drifting off to sleep and one while I was waking up again -- and so I poked at it a bit to see what fell out, and I think I really quite like this. :D
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Date: 2020-03-14 09:16 pm (UTC)moreany background in classical music(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-14 09:25 pm (UTC)plus the vague sense of Here's A Xylophone
(for a while, in one of the drafts, there were four ifs, for common time - 4/4 - but I decided I preferred this rhythm and 5/4 is more unbalancing anyway, harder to dance to)
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Date: 2020-03-15 12:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-14 09:28 pm (UTC)-- which is just a perfect self-referential description of That Specific Crush (and is one half of a diptych: Anonymous from the perspective of audient, You from that of performer).
-- AND ALSO OF COURSE Fractals, I am the ghost of my own lost lives...
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Date: 2020-03-20 08:32 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2020-03-20 09:48 am (UTC)Some of the lyrics are on CN's blog, but if you want more of them then hassle me with specifics and I'll type them up for you.
I am DELIGHTED to have Spread The Good News; thank you for letting me know. :D
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Date: 2020-03-20 12:59 pm (UTC)