Harbours are not built to be impermeable. Shelter in a storm is nonetheless a threshold to the wide liminality of the world entire. Safety is not bound within a cage.
Counselling is really good for me, heh. I was walking home from the co-op last night and suddenly realised that for all much of what i do is driven by the desperate desire to be "safe", I've been inadvertently boxing myself in; and starting to think about what "safe" might look like in an expansive rather than restrictive sense...
Obvious influences on this poem (to me): Mary Oliver's Don't Hesitate ("Joy is not meant to be a crumb"), Black Girl Dangerous On Getting Free, Neruda's Odes to Opposites wot I am reading at the moment (in stylistic terms, particularly the very short lines).
I have desired to go Where springs not fail, To fields where flies no sharp and sided hail And a few lilies blow.
And I have asked to be Where no storms come, Where the green swell is in the havens dumb, And out of the swing of the sea.
-Gerard Manley Hopkins
(Also, I rather think that Mother Theresa, among many others, would disagree with Hopkins' description of a life devoted to service, reflection, and entering into the Presence of Mystery. But damn, the man could poem.)
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Date: 2014-02-18 07:05 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2014-02-18 09:46 am (UTC)Obvious influences on this poem (to me): Mary Oliver's Don't Hesitate ("Joy is not meant to be a crumb"), Black Girl Dangerous On Getting Free, Neruda's Odes to Opposites wot I am reading at the moment (in stylistic terms, particularly the very short lines).
This is perhaps the opposite of your poem
Date: 2014-02-18 05:31 pm (UTC)A nun takes the veil
I have desired to go
Where springs not fail,
To fields where flies no sharp and sided hail
And a few lilies blow.
And I have asked to be
Where no storms come,
Where the green swell is in the havens dumb,
And out of the swing of the sea.
-Gerard Manley Hopkins
(Also, I rather think that Mother Theresa, among many others, would disagree with Hopkins' description of a life devoted to service, reflection, and entering into the Presence of Mystery. But damn, the man could poem.)
Re: This is perhaps the opposite of your poem
Date: 2014-02-18 05:58 pm (UTC)and -- yes, I probably disagree with it; and yes -- yes, it is a poem. Thank you so much for sharing it.
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