So I am genuinely pleased with the first quatrain and even the second, but I think it's fairly obvious I gave up halfway through? At some point I might come back and revisit the second half to see if I can't extend it into the metaphor I was originally trying for...
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Date: 2015-02-09 09:03 am (UTC)