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You cannot argue with rocks
or at least you cannot win an argument with rocks,
for they are slow and stolid and steeped in sunlight
(enough sunlight even for me)
but if I believed that this would keep you from trying
if I believed you less joyously stubborn, less bent upon
discovery and disentanglement, then I would needs must
love you less, and so
I delight in your delight, and in the act
of observing as you determined dreaming strive.

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Date: 2014-06-08 04:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fyreharper
:)

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Date: 2014-06-08 10:29 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] quirkytizzy
Sometimes that sort of poetry turns out the best. The words flow with having to stress or fret over every exact one. Plus your continual return to the image of a rock is powerful. Set in stone, strong. Like, literally and metaphorically.

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Date: 2014-06-11 05:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] calissa
This was so lovely! I adore the alliteration.

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Date: 2014-06-11 10:10 pm (UTC)
calissa: Photo of Swarovski crystal & gold figurine of inkpot and quill sitting on a page that says 'create every day' (Writing)
From: [personal profile] calissa
Yes! You write such lovely poetry that I'm sure your work will be snapped up in an instant :)

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